Post by Duke Anderson on Jul 16, 2010 0:48:08 GMT -5
I'm just hoping that someone could help me fix these paragraphs because people that I showed this too say that there some sentence structure problems and little grasp on basic concepts of grammar and the English language as a whole with all of these so I would greatly appreciate it if someone could help me correct all of them. Please and Thank You. They will all be the color of blue
Physical Appearance:
Micheal has sort of long brown hair with his bangs that goes straight between his eyes and he has really handsome sky blue eyes. His skin is of a palish color which is the most unique thing about him that himself but more importantly people around him thinks. He is exactly 5'2 and weighs 165 pounds but as he started to travel, Micheal made sure that he exercise enough to keep himself in tip top shape.
Clothing Style:
He wears a necklace that is in the shape of an bird which looks like its standing on some type of diamond or something. He wears a grayish coat and pants with his coat opened so that you can see he is wearing a white muscle shirt underneath. He wears a belt with another belt that lays underneath his first belt which he modified to hold his Pokeballs and a pack connected to the right side of his belt which is actually where he will hold his Gym Badges when he starts his journey. His gray pants sag behind him which shows off his underwear that he usually wears that day but most of the he wears boxers. When he exercise, Micheal wears a white t-shirt and just a pair of plain boxers.
History:
Matthew was born to the parents of two regular citizens who lived in Blackthorn City located in the Johto Region which means that his parents didn't have any exciting job or anything like that. While growing up, Micheal always thought that his life was really boring and always dreamed of becoming an Pokemon trainer.So when he got old enough he could have adventures and met really exciting and unique Pokemon along the way. He was always interested in Pokemon which is probably why he would always be seen readying a book about Pokemon or playing with just some random Pokemon.
He would spend most of his free time visiting his hometown Pokemon Professor. Just learning all he could about Pokemon and hopefully let his love for Pokemon grow and blossom. Matthew turned 14 years old when his parents were attacked by an unknown trainer and his Raichu. When he returned home from another visit to the Pokemon Professor in his hometown, Micheal discovered his parents severely wounded so he dialed 911. Micheal stayed with his parents until the ambulances arrived. His parents were in the hospital for three months before they were well enough to returned home. Matthew vowed that he would find the person who attacked his parents and make them pay.
When he turned 16, Micheal visited the Blackhorn City Pokemon Professor and gained his very first Pokemon which just happened to be an Charmander and began his adventures as an Pokemon Trainer.
Physical Appearance:
Micheal has sort of long brown hair with his bangs that goes straight between his eyes and he has really handsome sky blue eyes. His skin is of a palish color which is the most unique thing about him that himself but more importantly people around him thinks. He is exactly 5'2 and weighs 165 pounds but as he started to travel, Micheal made sure that he exercise enough to keep himself in tip top shape.
Clothing Style:
He wears a necklace that is in the shape of an bird which looks like its standing on some type of diamond or something. He wears a grayish coat and pants with his coat opened so that you can see he is wearing a white muscle shirt underneath. He wears a belt with another belt that lays underneath his first belt which he modified to hold his Pokeballs and a pack connected to the right side of his belt which is actually where he will hold his Gym Badges when he starts his journey. His gray pants sag behind him which shows off his underwear that he usually wears that day but most of the he wears boxers. When he exercise, Micheal wears a white t-shirt and just a pair of plain boxers.
History:
Matthew was born to the parents of two regular citizens who lived in Blackthorn City located in the Johto Region which means that his parents didn't have any exciting job or anything like that. While growing up, Micheal always thought that his life was really boring and always dreamed of becoming an Pokemon trainer.So when he got old enough he could have adventures and met really exciting and unique Pokemon along the way. He was always interested in Pokemon which is probably why he would always be seen readying a book about Pokemon or playing with just some random Pokemon.
He would spend most of his free time visiting his hometown Pokemon Professor. Just learning all he could about Pokemon and hopefully let his love for Pokemon grow and blossom. Matthew turned 14 years old when his parents were attacked by an unknown trainer and his Raichu. When he returned home from another visit to the Pokemon Professor in his hometown, Micheal discovered his parents severely wounded so he dialed 911. Micheal stayed with his parents until the ambulances arrived. His parents were in the hospital for three months before they were well enough to returned home. Matthew vowed that he would find the person who attacked his parents and make them pay.
When he turned 16, Micheal visited the Blackhorn City Pokemon Professor and gained his very first Pokemon which just happened to be an Charmander and began his adventures as an Pokemon Trainer.
